WOW!!
Amazingly awesome flash, it was so well done! I can totally see this being on the front page! : )
Reviews for "Lock Hawk Down Part One"
Hmm showed quality
In using TWEENS! no movements excepts motion and shape tweens. . . People DON'T like reading even though I do, and I do know this has nothing to do with BLACK HAWK DOWN, only that it is about war. . . PLOT: CRAP (sorry, i mean it) the image is ok... but why not!? they don't move! not a thing only tweeeeeeens!!! Sincerely THAT is what I hate about these clock-lock movies, the animation is 100% based on tweens and the characters are so used that I believe you always copy-paste them from old files. . .
To my opinion it looks kind of nice. . . yet plot is lame, voices even lamer, "mouth" or arrow movement very boring. . . but. . . its ok. . .
Rho-VIII responds:
Well...Constructive criticism alright, but a bit too stereotypical.
How else are you supposed to make a movie? You can't make a movie 100% fbf, it does nothing but put the file size up...
Very Nice!
I dont usually like clock/lock movies, but this was great! Good work!
Good Work
Overall, the animation was slick and the visual storytelling was excellent! The helicopter sequences were stunning and switching to a character's POV from time to time was top notch!
What you really need to work on is the sound. The sound effects and music sound great, but they should never drown out the characters' lines even if there are subtitles. Only when there was no background noise could I hear the characters speaking and, even then, the volume was a little too low. When there's speech and ambient noise, tone down the noise. Also, the end titles took far too long to appear.
Again, overall, this is a great piece! Be aware of your sound next time and part two should be golden! Good luck!
Rho-VIII responds:
Yeah, I know about that, it's just damn hard to fine-tune ALL the sounds to a specific level while still having them hearable. Thanks for the review.
BTW; try it now. it wasn't intended, it was a glitch in flash.
Ahhh. Pure Viewing Pleasure.
Yet another clock/lock movie to change the way I see flash. What's the deal with peach lock? Didn't he leave the lock legion a little while ago? Give me the heads up on that yeah? But yeah, pure viewing pleasure.
Rho-VIII responds:
Yeah dude, I am Peach Lock ^__^!
I left, but continued this. Now that this is a success I've rejoined! Thanks for reviewing!