FUCKING GREAT
normally i don't like the clock or lock crew movies
but i gotta admid this was one crazy movie
i liked it well done
Reviews for "Lock Hawk Down Part One"
Good, but a few things to touch up
Well, it was great and everything, but hearing bullets, without seeing bullets whizzing by, or seeing little sparks when a bullet hits the ground (Not sure how to explain it, but in CS or some FPS shooter, if you shoot a bullet at the ground it'll spark, show those sparks), took away from the experience. Try to add more detail, as in to add smoke when the chopper was hit by an RPG. As the other person said, make it more intense. The background fire should be louder, the bullets should be spraying everywhere.
shows promise
This has certainly advanced since it was an alpha!
This just doesn't feel like a war movie though. In the real Black Hawk Down Movie, the Americans dealt over 1k deaths. The action just doesn't feel intense enough.
Personally, I have no idea why tobbacco clock is a "lock ally" or why a civilian is able to take out RHCP lock--isn't a civilian kinda cannon fodder against a soldier? But thats kinda nit picking
In closing, I hope you choose to finish what you've started with this movie (I see a lot of part ones in your finished movies)
Rho-VIII responds:
a) Ok, point taken
b) If you were standing in a street with an M4 and some dude came running at you, it isn't as simple as "Get your gun out, BAM!" because the adrenaline kicks in and you freeze.
c) Tobaccoclock herself requested that. Ask her, not me :-P
d) I definitely will be finishing this movie. Production is due to start this friday (end of exams) and I will be cramming MUCH more action in, as that is what Part Two is mainly composed of.
Thanks for the review
Good job
i dont ussually like clock/lock mivies but i like this one.
Pretty Good
I've been exited to see this ever since i saw it in the Alpha's i've always been a fan of the clock crew though, other than that Great movie, Definatly good drawings of vehicles/weapons!