Good for a first time
The spelling was a big eye-catcher, Although it didn't hinder the story, I liked the story line, and If this was just your first flas, you have some potential. Overall it was decent, Looking forward to seeing more of your work
Good for a first time
The spelling was a big eye-catcher, Although it didn't hinder the story, I liked the story line, and If this was just your first flas, you have some potential. Overall it was decent, Looking forward to seeing more of your work
Nice-y(rod i invented)
Reallly good for a first
Good work!
Good work with this movie!
The end was predictable, that's why it's so good because i would have done the same!
succes
Cool
This reminds me a lot of Lone Wolf and Cub, a great manga. Not a bad flash. Not bad at all.
A nice first flash.
This was a good first flash but it did have it's flaws such as many typos in the script and lack of detail in the animation overall especially the character designs,i didn't really enjoy this all that much cause it was more sneaking around than it was action,overall it was a nice first flash but you just need to practice more on you animation detail and be more creative but just keep on practicing and you will be better in those catagories in no time. =)