Not bad at all..
So what if it had bad grammar and no preloader or a play button. It was great for a first =)
Reviews for "Dishonour."
This is quite possibly the greatest short movie.
Wonderful---the way the tension builds and the text fades in and out, creating a good sense of what is going on... And the ending totally threw me off, I wasn't expecting that at all! If at all possible, you shouldn't change this one bit!
Hmmm.
TR.
cool
Wow, not bad for a first, and a most interesting story it is at that.
First movie?
Not bad for a first movie, but this wasn't the greatest thing in NGs. First of all, I had my sound all the way up but couldn't hear a thing! One thing I liked was the passage you took from the 1400's was it? That was interesting. The story was an okay idea, though I didn't get it all exactly... if there had been sound, maybe I would have.