Hmmm....
I'll have to agree with ralip1 on this one... the concept is sound and the music is eerie.. but the animation could use a lot of work..the story is to illistrate the betrayal of one's lord by finding another way of life right? Not bad, that's something i havn't heard of before, but put it in a format that flows, this was way too choppy. Nice try, but the effort isn't impressive. Sorry, Maybe you could try a Manga-esqe style? just one frame at a time? that would prolly be really cool.
I dont see whats good about this video at all
I animation is ewww, the story is... it isnt even that good. I mean, its basically a narrator saying quotes and cliches.
The story isnt even present really... and the sound.... Yeah... sound was bad too.
But the thing that bugs me is that people actually like this....
Fantastic
For the time it was made this is truly impressive. 2000 is a long time ago and yet this is one of the submissions that hold up. It doesn't have graphical flare but it does acomplish its task in the story department.
NOt bad not bad at all.
its good it makes a good point and has a lesson in there too but it lacks something................
A lesson is there, but it takes a while
I liked the idea and the story, however the execution was done more like a film trailer rather than a short story. I could see what you were going for and to keep it up. More practice, plus trial and error will help improve your animation skills. I did enjoy the story, the ending was endearing.