Reviews for A Day at the Office

[Luwano]

Expression, colours and contrast

I think it came out great. I really like the overall colour scheme and the contrast. They create an almost completely unemotional atmosphere, that goes pretty well with the setting.

I also like how you gave them different facial expression while they only have eyes. Most bots look dull or bored and to me #F6 and #F7 look almost sad, while the main char looks surprised.

Not sure if this is some kind of helpful feedback, but when I look at it in full size I always imagine some kind of loud electric buzz emanating from those glowing "control orbs".

Overall, good job of course.

[Hyptosis]

Kick ass

Great job dude. A badass entry. ^5

[Eternal-Morbid]

Wow

This is very neat. I like the colorings and the way the robots appear. Great work.
P.S: Purple eyes for the win!

[Lintire]

Visceral Apprehension

If there's anything to summarize about the picture, it's that it really does look as if it were too ambitious and that you simply didn't really have the time to sink into it to truly make it memorable.

You've done a good job, Toas, that's for sure. I like the animation (or should I say dynamicness? character?) of each individual character, the implied story behind the picture, and that the way that you've managed to work via indication in the farther parts of the image really does help to unite attention to the focal point.

However, a piece like this needs variety, and a really dynamic pose. Which is to say, that if you were to have done it again, you might want to be looking at either really centering the piece around the individual robot (we'll call him Dave) or have the picture be akin to a landscape piece, with Dave as a long figure among a hundred. The really be dynamic with it.

But as is, it works, and it works well. It's a shame that you haven't gotten more recognition for this piece, unless you've just submitted it and I've made myself out ot be a total douche. Let it be known that as of now, it has ~200 views.

Great work, man!

[GabrieleB]

Tath's good

Good work , but ithink there are some fault about prespectrive...anyway is good i like it

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

There's nothing wrong with the perspective, it's a cylindrical room. No joke.