AWESOME!!!
this was a really cool beat and bassline, but like many other songs submitted here you lack the "roof-lifting"-part. At 00:46 you should bring in that part (a 32 bar part with high intesity) (high bass and treble with melody) And THEN bring in the down-faded part with the talking (thats a bridge, and should be after the "chorus").
Listen to: ~EnV~Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) for hints for the high intesity part. But ofcourse you have to make it on the meldy you have in 01:10 and out.
thx for submitting, keep working. Love what you do!