hmm...
The graphics were good, but it just kept going on and on and on, no offence. I started to get bored after he ran away from the fish and I was going to close the page, then I decided to wait and see if it had a funny ending... but it didn't. Keep on trying, and you'll get there, or it might just be that I'm impatient but anyway, keep trying, and maybe your next flash i'll like :)