Reviews for FF-Starcraft 1

[azim1234]

slow and problematic

the whole thing went rather slowly this is partly due to the text on screen displaying so slow and the lack of speech

The sprite also moved erratically meaning they just went where they please dragons was no where near some zelda yet mysteriously they flew off quite randomly

the storyline was quite sucky but that may be due to the slow pace

the music was quite good i thought different for each scene helped set it rather well but no sound effects tho no preloader i tdont think either which is a bit annoying

but overall good idea had me intriged just needs to be properly executed

[000MrBlonde000]

I really liked your intention

It is a great idea, but you have some major problems. There's really not much sound, perhaps some voice acting and sound effects? The music wasn't the great of choice either, didn't fit in with what was going on. The spritework was...well...horrible. Also, I must say you are also quite illiterate. The video itself is rather slow moving too.
As for the voice acting, you can contact me and I will be happy to do some for you. The emails [e-mail], and the AIMs kaboomx79.

Try remaking this, I really see it having good potential.

[Pheralan]

Needs some definate work.

The idea is sound, though I think I would scrap the whole Starcraft thing and adopt a Warcraft set of sprites. With all the sword toating people you have running around that particular movie, I'd think the medieval setting would work much better for your movie. The sounds were pretty nice, I enjoyed that. The story, though it seems to be a good idea, is quite incoherant. You might want to rethink some of your phrasing on things in order to add some coherancy to your movie.

Also, spellcheck your stuff. There are lots of errors.

All in all, not a bad start, but keep on truckin', this could get a lot better.

[Capthavic]

Yeah needs work.

I gotta agree with Gilgameshx, you had a good idea but you need to work on the presentation a bit. Good first try though!

[GilgameshX]

Needs to be edited

Well it was a good Idea,but the animations need work.Try to use some movement sprites because they just kinda look like there sliding around