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Reviews for "Little Fighter Alpha Ch.1"

Decent.

I decided to view the series before watching 9, seeing how it is being critically lauded. Overall, not bad.

I do not know why, but I burst out laughing when the second guy came back to help the main character. All you see is his energy blast, then you see him SLOWLY walking into view, the little walking sound too, proclaiming it's not finished yet.

Don't mind me, I just found that little bit gold.

MaxR responds:

lol I know what you mean, when I look back to my older chapters, I sometimes ask myself what I was doing? Yeah I did notice them walking very slow in this chapter and some lines I found rather funny too. Thank you for your comment and I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters.

I like

I love LF2. I play it a lot. The only thing i saw u could have changede or fix is the villans. I see u made firzan the villan when i think firzen is actualy a hero. He is actualy freez and firen fused. Wat u should do is make the villans Julian and his sun justin. With the guard and watever. Also make it so that firen and freez are brothers (witch they r) who doen't realy get a long, they r total oposite (witch they r) but when they work together (that is run into each other) and fuse they become one of the mose powerful ppl in LF2. Other than that great. If u want to talk more about somehitng after all i know my LF2. Then just email me or Aim me. Plz feel free to i can make more sugestions to make it better than just typing it here and stuff.

MaxR responds:

oh really? I never even beat the last boss lol.

lolz little fighter

I have lf2 on my computer an its a good game u really put the story from the game to a movie in a good way.But i always thought Bat was evil!

MaxR responds:

but if you actually beated the game you know that's not fully true, near the end he joins you.

I love LF2, but not this...

I really like LF2, but the storyline you seem to have made up isn't right, for several reasons, one of them is that Firzen and Firen and Freeze seem to exist seperately, but they can't since Firen and Freeze fuse into Firzen ;)
But oh well, it's just youur fantasy, nothing wrong with that ;)
What is wrong, are the graphics. You could easily rip all the sprites, and still you accomplish it having a quite unprofessional look.
Also having to click the text box makes this feeling stronger.
I gave an 8 for graphics, because I just love LF2 ^^

Good luck, though, in the rest of you movies :)

It was okay

It was to short, you started the series heavy with a big fight, we dont know any background apart from a few lines at the start, the audio didnt fit completely and obvissly you need work editing it together ect...

MaxR responds:

thanks for the feedback, I have tried to improve as the series progressed. You'll see a difference as you watch each chapter, I promise!