A couple useful pointers
Don't give up on the whole idea. Cuz it's good!
But here ae a couple things that I think you sholuld change:
1)Make it start sooner - no one wants to watch a guy snoring for 3 minutes before the animation starts.
2)I would try to put in more of a story line. And maybe some more audible conversation.
3)The background for the first scene could use some more detail.
Overall really good though!
Good luk wit ur fash!
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where to begin
the graphics were ok...still shitty, and was there even a story line? no, this movie had absolutly no storyline, he kills a cop outside, then he's inside, and kills some random person, then he is on a computer and is downloading something, then there is a random bomb...fuck dude, make some logical scene tranfers, i dont know what the hell was going on in this movie!!
pretty good
since when does an AK-47 have a laser scope? meh im ont a gun person... good stuff
ummmm
maybe its just me but does the guy just sleep through the whole thing
its good but...
its really good but if you had streamed the music it would of been a hell of as lot better!!! the file size would be half what it is.