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holy cow..... its amazing. it makes me want to burst into tears
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holy cow..... its amazing. it makes me want to burst into tears
god all of you are weak...
i will say this is a great song, but i cant believe eople are bursting in to tears and tearing up, people are so weak hearted
meh
Don't get me wrong, it's a good melody, but there is a LOT of room for improvement. One word: Dynamics.
When the violin-tremolos come in, I expect them to swell within every measure. Start quiet, build in the middle, quiet again, then change notes. Swell again, and so on.
Think of it like a tide, flowing in and out. Or like a river, or a roller coaster: it's got to keep moving, and changing the volume helps to build momentum.
The piano could do something similar: keep beat one just a little louder than the rest. Maybe make beat three a hair quieter.