not bad
It was a pretty good CT movie. But there was just something missing. But besides that I thought it was decent.
Reviews for "ChronoTrigger"
Vinstigator responds:
thx
A masterpeice. A 5 it shall be.
Great plot. Great story. Great everything. Cant wait to see the second part (if there is one).
Vinstigator responds:
Thanks! Probably no sequel will be made though
Good, but not your best work
There was definatly some work put into the effects on this movie, and the sprite movement was FAR better than anything you've done before that said most of my issues with the flash come from a literature standpoint, the story and events just seemed...well rushed. In the preview you showed an onslaught of enemy fighting which was well orchestrated however here you had a very quickly executed plot that just felt a bit weak and they did not fight that much - the escape as you had mentioned it was supposed to be a fight to the death through hordes of enemies but thats not what ended up happening here. You didn't do a bad job per se but you can do SO much better than this, therefore I can only give it an average score - As with all things I hope that you've garnered a learning experience from making this one. My main suggestion is that if you're going to do an action focused story that doesnt have a huge plotline thats fine but you'll need the action there to do it. Or conversley if you want just a minor action story that focuses on plot then give the plot and characters more depth as you have done in your Final Fantasy VI: The Day After series. I hope this review is helpful to you - I could lied and gush with praise because I enjoy the Day After series but that wouldn't be doing you any favors ^__^ Best of luck on your next production.
Vinstigator responds:
Yeah I understand what you are saying, but I was trying to focus more on action than plot. And now I can see that plot is what gets me those awesome scores so I shall focus more on plot from now on. Thanks for the review!
Not a bad one, but not too good either.
I admire your effort, it was a decent flash, but here is what I found with it:
The good:
-The movements were good. You really used a good bit of sprites to make it look like the game. Good one.
-Sound was good too, although you ripped some from Final Fantasy.
The bad:
-The scene transitions are slow. The fading in and out got irritating.
-The speech kept moving. You could have made the flash a bit larger and put a caption box.
The ugly:
-You started off too sudden. The plot was not good enough or supported in the beginning. You could have added a bit more background, like a gray-out scale and the old "Once upon a time" angle.
-Too SLOW. Speed up your frame rates. No one want's to see the movie in just once speed.
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Other than this, you have a talent, just keep it up. Soon you'll be fabeled... just practice!
Vinstigator responds:
Well thanks for the constructive criticism, I'll keep that stuff in mind...
i liked this
it was pretty cool, chrono trigger movies are always awesome, and the vinstigator pulled through again.
the only thing i'd work on is the size of the movie screen. i tried zooming in but then i missed some of the dialogue.
Vinstigator responds:
I'll try to fix the movie size