Learn to spell
First of all, learn to spell, second of all, ADD SOUNDS!!! No action movie is good without sounds!! Or is it just my computer since most ppl voted 5-10 for sounds. The animations were slow but rather smooth. YOu can do a lot better than this, interesting to watch tho. Btw, i would suggest you use sprites for everything, including the smoke and that red light by that motor cafe. Cuz sprites and the ugly drawing is a rilli bad combination.
okay i really did not enjoy
Look first of all check ur speellings it was not good quality it can just balance okay because it was a good story ideas the length apart from that all bad quality
I realy realy realy
didn't like it.. the sprites where ok.. but when you started drawing your own things like the smoke and the beacon it was just... YUK.. the english was bad eather but that's not your fault I guess.. mine's not perfect either.. but the movie wasn't as good as I hoped..
wasn't so great
I agree with the guy below me. You could've done better. There was one thing that you did perfectly. That was the sound. I haven't seen any other flash work (with the exception of Metal Gear Awesome) with better sound. I am wondering how your work got excessive nudity. THERE WAS NONE FOR CHRIST'S SAKE. If you redid this that would be great.
goo bak to 5th grad
yu ned 2 lern ho w2 spel l (sarcasm in case you didn't quite understand that)