it was good....only becuz it was related to anime
ANIME!!!
Reviews for "Red Moon Sage: Ep01"
ZeroCartin responds:
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Please stop using the Fithos Lusec song. Please.
Honestly, it's such a well-known song that it's distracting. You also need to make sure the music doesn't drown out the dialogue, as it did several times, and remember to secure yourself better voice actors. And honestly, ten pieces of gold? To chase after that crazy man?
But your art is very well done, if inconsistent at times. The main character's design in particular is very nice. You also pay an unusual amount of attention to your backgrounds, which makes a notable amount of difference.
If you continue with this series, try not to be so predictable. I could see the snail-crushing transition from a mile away. Also, if you're doing a decapitation scene, it's been done before, so try to at least take it from a more interesting angle.
Overall, well done. Hope you make another.
ZeroCartin responds:
haha, thx for the review but i have some stuff to say back
1) Music, ur right, ill worry on that for the next ep.
2)Ten pieces of gold could be worth a lot in different cultures. Plus, it a god damn movie,lol. For ur info, 10 pieces of gold = $1000, lol. Plus, the guys were poor, and needed money... yeah.
3) Yeah, ill try not to be predictible, hhe.
Thx again man. XD
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its okay but u need a better story line because i had no clue what happened
Why... why was it so short!!!???
It was a good movie, but it needs more story. Also, it was only like, 1 minute long. With art and action like this, I want something longer!
ZeroCartin responds:
hehe, well, as i said in the description, I had 2 weeks to do this, and my teacher said 40-45 secs max. Yet, i made it last like 1 min and 15 secs.
not bad
kick ass drawings. but the dialouge SUCKED. seriously. and the storyline needs to be more coherent. but still cool animation