Try adding some words to it
i think words makes it sound better
Reviews for "Wrapped in black remix"
Yes... no... it's a possible work on it.
Well you got a nice bit of work here, I can dig the sound to it and really well done... but the percussion sounds sloppy is the only true problem. Why not remake it and fix it up a bit? You could easily do it with the way you got the sound to work and maybe make up for lack of lyrics with some type of instrument?