Nothing new or original...
OK, clearly you're capable of putting time and effort into creating a nicely produced and fairly clean Flash animation. Why not take that talent and do something interesting with it? I mean, how many hundreds of Flash movies make use of the exact same Chrono Trigger sprites and music tracks? And I can't even say you're doing something new with the sprites either. The story is the same clichéd tripe we've seen many times before.
Besides that, and I can't stress this point enough: Please proofread your work! Obviously you're going for a serious, dark tone in your movie, but when words are misspelled and punctuation is missing and letters are incorrectly capitalized, it really detracts from the mood you're trying to establish. It's not "takeing", it's taking! And if you don't have a firm grasp of "ye olde English", it's probably best not to even attempt it.
Now, I apologize for singling you out. the truth is many others are guilty of the same mistakes I'm calling you on. But because I see the potential for more in your work, I thought I'd give you a shove in the right direction. Take my advice or don't, it's up to you.