What does this have to do with Oriental?
I'm an Asian American, so I have a good sense of what Oriental music sounds like. This sounds like the author is attempting to come close, but just miss anyway.
It sounds more like something that comes out of Africa, rather than Asia.
(BTW I'm Chinese so there's my bias)
I originally wanted to find some music I that would remind me of riding on an airliner (I want to be an airline manager one day, otherwise an Air Force officer would do...) or something that would remind me of warfare, since the paper I write next has to do with the Comparison of Military to Business Strategy (As applied to new media publishing, so this is probably already completely over your heads... if you don't know IT, you probably would do yourselves a favor by not asking me for the link to the paper.). Of course, I could always settle for something having to do with kickboxing, but then again I'm not writing any papers about that line of trade...
So I'd just like you to know that
A. This needs work.
B. This doesn't sound Asian to an Asian, so you probably messed up somewhere.
C. This doesn't even qualify to be called "Oriental" something something, so I'd pretty much, if I were you, leave the Oriental part out of the name.
D. This is too short.
E. All of the above.
The correct answer is "E".
Please rework your piece. I have faith that you can do better.
It may be your first try, but don't worry, you're at least better than me. I studied the piano for four years and what has come of it? I can play a four second piece. What dismalness!
So I stick to writing about air travel and boxing.
At least the music helped develop my left brain. It also strengthened my right brain.
But in the end I always have right brain dominance. I'm ADHD, so I pretty much need stimulation right now at 0213 EST (0713 ZULU) while I try to finish my homework. After all, I only go to college because I want to become a military commander. Guess these allnighters will really help when I'm on the battlefields of the future (I plan to become a Special Operations pilot).
I hope when that time comes I don't need to be immersed in Faux Asiatic noise like this...
Sorry if it sounded kind of raw, but I've been up for more than 21 hours by now. That's just the beginning of my tool. I can't really think straight now, just need to keep on keeping on while I try to get my papers done...
