excited to see more...
hey this is actually pretty cool...however there are some things wrong...it just seemed like it was a bit random and it went to fast...however im pretty excited to see the next video made for this...or maybe this whole thing is just a glitch...lol!! yeah i like this one!
nice
Good job on ur movie. It was fresh and cool but i have to agree that the voices really suck. The story was kinda confusing to me but at least it had a story. And ofcourse the visuals were impressing like everybody else said.
But i have to correct u on ur author's comments. U dont publish flash movies here just let them be reviewed by other flash artists. They dont give u an objective opinion. Someone with no flash knowhow cares less about the technical aspect and judges ur flash on the entertainment value. That is something way more important than a comment like: Wow nice visuals, loved the blurs and 3d radar effects etc. Although i made flash movies i just wanted to point this out for u
Could be a top 50 I think
As said b4 your voices arent up to par with your animations. I like this whole idea you have here and better voices would really clean it up. Also the story moves a bit too fast at times. With a little work in those areas, I think your next flashes could be holding scores of 4 or higher even. Anyway Great Work I give it a 5 for great original artwork and fk.
Is this a trailer?
I know it's not, but you play with special effects so much that it could be. Hell the movie IS one large special effect. No problom with that, FXes are always nice, but you forgot to tell the storyline clearly. I didn't understand half of what was going on in there (maybe 'cause I haven't watched the other EgoCities? Dunno). Well that's all. Remember the storytelling next time!
Don't Complain
I'm sick of people like you bitching about them giving you a bad rating if they do just to start off. Second I'm sick of people using the music in from the matrix in thier presentations, its getingold and drawn out. I know how hard it is to create flash I've doneit before but thats no excuse for poorly drawn characters, the rest of your art is perfectally fine, then again it's all geometric, work on your natural shapes and smoothing it out. try doing it on paper first and yes I do know that what looks good on paper dosent nessecairily look good on a diferent medium but you had to draw all thoe characters anyway so practice with it. BTW someparts were really slow moving and had no point to them beingin there. Also don't even get on me for not having any submissions here, if I had the money and time you can bet I would put something up.