Good Effort
I liked ths style of this movie. Even though the plot is pretty much old ground, it was put together well and made me want to watch it through to the end. A couple of criticisms: 1. You need to work on your lip-syncing it was distracting both in the main film and in the "hidden" music video. 2. I suspect you held the microphone very close to your mouth to try and get a different sound for the judge's voice, but it mainly came out muffled and muddy. Try re-recording that with maybe someone else's voice. 3. There were numerous spelling errors in the text. I know it may seem like a small thing, but when I see some pretty basic spelling errors I get the impression that this person doesn't pay enough attention to detail. Still it's god work and if you can fix these things, I'll raise my 4 to a 5.