Haha.
I saw this in the portal and thought, "Hey! Cool!" When the movie loaded, I thought, "Hey! Blam point!" And then came the ending. You get a 3.
I think it could've been a lot funnier if the Peach and Mario sprites were better animated, like the other sprite (no spoilers here;). Maybe rework the dialogue just a tad too. But that's for THIS movie.
For future movies, more animation, sound effects, keep up the good music - but read the NG FAQ on how to compress music - and maybe open up Notepad before you insert the text and go over it a few times, see if you can crack yourself up. That's the main thing. =)