this was a good song, more or less
it was definately upbeat, but not really happy if u asked me haha it seemed kind of like a robotic monotony. I jst decided to go to the WIP thread to post my own song, and I saw ur comment, so here's my constructive crit [posted on the thread]:
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/8 16732/4
my comments: the lead bloopy synth followed a good melody, the off-key notes every now and then were cool. i think it could be better if they had were shaped a little less--like just a straight wave, theres a quality to them that makes it seem not as unfeeling.
the drums could have been better - either a stronger bass drum or a more subdued one would have been better i think, the one u have now seems a little too... presetty? lol. for the hats, try varying the volume, like makign it go from soft to loud on each triplet to make it more dynamic, and the snare sample is just lame--i'd find a completely different sound for it, or just remove it alltogether if it still sounds good.
the backup lead was cliched NG style, but it fit the style of teh song well enough i guess. i think a deep pad would have worked a lot better, but thats jst my opinion. the bassline would have also been better if u can make it lower and deeper. you can try keeping the original sound by layering it with a low sine wave instead of just a sawtooth--i wanna feel my woofers shake more :)
i guess thats all my constructive crit for now, hope i helped!