wish it were...
More original. It sounds very nice and proffesional no doubt about that. This song doesn't deserve anything less than a 5. But to be honest I was reminded of Evenesence the whole way through. Sorry lol but great job on the mixing and vocals were great. Nice song.
I'm honestly not a fan of rap and the like...
But I like this song. I like it's message. You did good. There's obvious emotion behind it - at the least behind the writing and how the words are put. Either you're good at faking something long and deeply felt, or else you're pro at conveying your feeling when you completely, utterly feel that feeling that some people just can't grasp and put down into words, or into vibration, or into image. Or any hybrid of the three, or any other thing. v.v I really enjoy this piece of music, and I think it could be used to tell an even greater message in a story; although I really wish you hadn't added on that last part - it kind of ruins the mood, y'know? Amazing piece, and I intend to use it in my series if you don't mind. Well, provided I find the necessary place - I'm sure I will. :)
might have been...
nice ot have given Anastasia a bit of a shout on this one ;)
Really impressed though, i think you probably fall out of time on some of your line cross-over lyrics, but it's very VERY good... i hope your pushing this to someone, can't remember who anastaisa's label is, but you should be sending this over :D
Not Bad
not my thing, but not bad. not much to say. 4/5, 9/10. good work
EXELENT
PRETTY COOL SONG