Pretty good...
Graphics: Quite nice and innocent looking... the little fps counter wasn't really needed, as there wasn't much animation.
Style: Cool style, although already done in that stick thingy. but a cool idea.
Sound: Nice and well used
Violence: None as such...
Interactivity: The whole thing is a game. And a great game at that.
Humour: Not really.
Overall: Great game, just do the following stuff:
Make sure strength, charm, and stuff affect your pay. Also, have different jobs have different requirements. Maybe have some jobs $50 x charm or something like that. Also, see if you can stop people going into negative dollars... I know you cant buy stuff while in debt, but make limits to what else you can do while in the negativeness.
For some reason I cant drive my car twice. I drive once, then teh button has dissappeared.
Have different things available to do in morning, afternoon, evening... and have time progress over... well... time.