good work
Keep em' coming.
Reviews for "The Resurrection"
Good Message
That was a good message to spread the Gospel on Newgrounds. However, the animation sucked. You should definately improve the graphics. It was a really good message, though.
It's not bad, and I even liked how you used the sound of the counter strike step, and I even liked how you used the CGI in this, but the strange thing is that you used synthetic voices in this case, so it's not nothing bad in the animation, but the concept is weird in this
First steps are always the hardest.
First off, ignore the last review. Anyone who says that they go into something open-minded then proceeds to burn a work based on outward apperanaces is not someone to take seriously.
Secondly, I'd like to thank you for taking this first step were others fear to tread. It's a touchy subject, but it needs to be shared.
Yet I do need to share my critique. Yes, the drawing does need practice. Although I am not an artist myself (and to tell the truth have problems even making stick figures :p), I realise that Newgrounds partons have a tendency to base how good a work is on how nicely it is presented, rather on the quality of work put in.
Also, the voices need to be worked on too. If nothing else, they just have to be paced more naturally, rather than just jammed together. Start with that, then work on the quality of the voices.
Hope this helps. Persevere fellow brother in Christ.
Well...
I understand it, and although I am not Christian I appreciate it. I realise it took some time. Good job, just try to do better graphics next time.