Nice work
I like this. Its a much more fantastic story than "Xin" which you are working on. You're art work is nice. There are a few little things that can be fixed, most people wouldn't recognize anyway. And then you're lines are too thick. You could take time to use an eraser and give the lines changes and it would look about twenty times better.
this could be turned into a sweet ass rpg!
im serious...
I like XIn and this was good but need like text YO
i jsut wasnt to sure wut the story line is
DUDE
THAT WAS LIKE A VIDEO GAME INTRO THAT WAS F'ING GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!
wow was she super human?
the way she jumped on the trees and jumped over that water was amazing...i hope you arent only making one episode..i never felt so good about silent films...and im sorry but this beats XIN by a long shot in the imagination department..