not bad...
the only things i can complain about are that i think you should have typed insted of speeking... no offence but your voice got a little annoying, no offence intended. and also the hands were a little scetchy, kinda wobbly, the lines needed to be straiter but in the real drawing we can fix that... but i must say i may have a bias because i already know how to draw... maybe that's why i got annoyed... but good job anyways.