Yaaaay! =^,w,^=
Next to ReMotion (and your remix of Russia Privjet), this is one of my absolute favorite songs of any kind!!! But (wrong grammar, w/e :P)......this feels kinda more like a happy, up-beat sort of song! Euphoric I guess you could describe with, but I wouldn't call it a rave song in my opinion....more like a happy trance.....hmm....well I guess that WOULD kinda be a rave song . XD Since you asked, my one tip/suggestion would be to perhaps make the song a little more upbeat/faster at some parts.....
Um, for example, the theme (or one of them, at least) seems to be:
C, DB, B, B, BDGA, A, A, A, AB, C, C, C, E, GE, D, D (the C, D might be changed do the end though O.O)
The last D or so gets muted-ish (so to speak), which is great since it sounds cool and provides variety too, but instead of stuff like that, maybe you should put a part with a more....driving beat and/or more actually BURNING (italics, not capitals) part, or maybe speed it up or something. It's really fun to listen to, but I just think that this song sometimes gets just a tiiiiny bit redundant since it repeats more or less the same melodies/harmonies quite a bit (which is, again, great and it's a fun thing :D) and I just think it needs some more, well, BURNING SENSATION (XD) ya know?
Otherwise, I LOVED your song!!!
=^,w,^=