This is a funny idea
Your story telling could use some work. Maybe try to shoten it up, and add a some humor maybe some remark about certain companies.
Reviews for "QA & Software Testing"
Sneakers responds:
Well, as I said before, I was working with the script I was given. I don't understand much about the content, only had an idea, and just tried to bring the humour out visually. Since my understanding is limited, and it was a short time span, I didn't have much time to research, just focused on finishing it. :) I see what you mean, and I agree...there definally could be improvements, if the time was given for it. Thanks for the suggestions and review.
It was good!
Like the guy before me said, it didn't make any sense, which is true, but it was good! Make some more!
Sneakers responds:
Thanks for the comments, and yes I agree...it didn't make any sense to me either...but like I said, it was for my brothers class presentation about QA and Software testing, and so it actually made sense to target audience, which is the key factor to making flash movies. Apparently the class loved it. Go fig. :D Thanks for the review and praise.
HAHA
i lovvved that. It really didnt make any sense but i liked it. The only thing that sucked was that annoying loop thing....ehh...
Sneakers responds:
Thanks. :) To be honest....I had no idea what it was about either. :) I just had an idea, and tried to make it as exaggerated as I could from what my brother told me what was to happen. I basicly did the animation first, and went back with detail on the couple hours I had left til unconciousness :)
Good
This shows a lot of potential. The animation was pretty good, and the scripting was...interesting. Keep at it and I think you could be great flash animators.
Sneakers responds:
Thanks. I watch alot of flash movies, looking at styles, and trying to make my style easy to animate. As for the scripting...well...any work me and my brother do will most likely be....well..odd :) This is the first collaboration we did, and are planning other stuff as soon as my one project is finished.