Hmm...
It seems that you just took the manga scans and 'coloured them in'. You did animate them however, and while it's almost blatant plaugerism (you didn't even make a credit to Aku-Tenshi for supplying the script that you also copied), I thought it was cool. Like the other posts say: Add some sound. Even a KH tune in the background would do.
~Zannek