That was sexy
I thought it was going to be a ballad the whole way through but near the end you turned it into a more hard feeling. I agree with penguinboi that the delay near the middle didn't work too well. It just seems that there was too much at some points. Other than that I loved it. Great job!
Eureka! Maybe that's what I have been missing this whole time...it doesn't need to change so dramatically. I have never been able to get back from that middle part probably because it DOES NOT BELONG THERE! It is a cool part in and of itself, just not in this song. Even the lyrical direction changes completely at that point. Thank you both very much for that insight! (I gave the same response to Penguinboi since you both agreed about that). Thanks again!
got to agree with the others
the middle doesnt fit other then that its a great song hope you fix it and make it even better!!
He's Right, That was Sexy...
I dunno, the break in the middle kinda rocked Chili Pepper Style..kinda caught my by surprise though...and I think your right. There's nowhere to go from there....hmmm
Still loved it!
5/5
10/10!!!!
excellent
I loved everything about this. And I thought the change in it was very well done.
5/5
10/10
Thanks for the high scores and kind words, Poo! I also like the change, but I have always had trouble going from there. Nick has given some good ideas thatjust might work. Thanks again!
Goil.
Nice work, dudes - I liked the Sudden change of Pace!
Thank you. Actually, I played everything but the drums (loops), so thanks even more!