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Reviews for "[TMM43] Breathe"

Not bad :)

It's got a very calming feel to it. I like where it's going. Although, I have three suggestions for you.
1) The lead synth is not very powerful. It needs more presence in the song. A different instrument and maybe a higher octave would do the trick. Maybe a classic sync-lead or a bell like bad would do the trick. You could try a supersaw but it may be a bit overpowering for the mood of the song.
2) This is the full song? lol. Try extending it. A long introduction and outrduction makes it easier for DJs to mix into their sets. Hence why you see the 12inch mixes of songs topping about 7minuets.
3) Just spice up the drums a bit, ride hats, off beat snare drums, layered open hats etc and you'll have some very thick drums to groove along with. :)

Not a bad track. Reminds me of the early 2000's when everyone started listening to Ibiza Trance.

~BenA.

RrC

I'm a fan of you, and i like yours song, but i HAVE to review this for the club, so my sores might be biased. =3

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I like the intro, from 0:01-1:00 and then after that, you got this synth goin through.

~Review Request Club.

I know this midi pack...

You based your whole song around those midi melodies ect that come with the vipzone midi's I think it is. Good job but it would be better if you could make it yourself than just relying on midi packs. Its also more fun to create it yourself.

TMM43 responds:

Try reading the Author's Comments next time.

You're right, the entire song was a midi!
</sarcasm>

Woots.

It's a neat trance song that just needs to be a bit more powerful here and there. You got it homes, just fix the equalization through the Lead Synth and Bass, slightly. Keep up the good work.
-The Review Request Club