Not bad.
I liked this audio submission and really couldn't find too much wrong with it if anything at all. I think the title Breathe is a really good title for the song. It's like the breathing starts of slow and then gets more frantic as the song goes on. Overall, great job and keep up the good work.
C52
~ Review Request Club ~
Pretty Nice
Has that calm feel :P Well It is softcore xD
I like your little arp, and your fades are never boring. Makes arp seem a little less repetitive too :P
At the end though, You could've put a snare with that kick roll, just a small one :P
It loops really well O.o I didn't realise it was playing again xD
5/5 9/10
Smooth stuff :D
Brilliant job :)
The beginning is so soothing, it brings the image of staring up at the night skies to my mind. I just love the transition at 1:12, simple but effective. The melodies are brilliant, they all really went well with each other.
In my opinion, at around 2:35-2:40 you should have added some delay or reverb on that piano and had it just playing alone for a bit without the arp.
I would have added a few more drum variations or drum cuts but that's just me ;) The cymbals you used sounded really swell, I have a hard time getting good ones some times.
Overall, a great calming piece. I'm definitely going to check out your other work; thanks much for your review, I really love getting constructive ones. And do you use FL? If so we should definitely collab some time.
Keep up the good work!
Woots.
It's a neat trance song that just needs to be a bit more powerful here and there. You got it homes, just fix the equalization through the Lead Synth and Bass, slightly. Keep up the good work.
-The Review Request Club
Not bad :)
It's got a very calming feel to it. I like where it's going. Although, I have three suggestions for you.
1) The lead synth is not very powerful. It needs more presence in the song. A different instrument and maybe a higher octave would do the trick. Maybe a classic sync-lead or a bell like bad would do the trick. You could try a supersaw but it may be a bit overpowering for the mood of the song.
2) This is the full song? lol. Try extending it. A long introduction and outrduction makes it easier for DJs to mix into their sets. Hence why you see the 12inch mixes of songs topping about 7minuets.
3) Just spice up the drums a bit, ride hats, off beat snare drums, layered open hats etc and you'll have some very thick drums to groove along with. :)
Not a bad track. Reminds me of the early 2000's when everyone started listening to Ibiza Trance.
~BenA.