not all that great
WASNT THAT FUNNY
not all that great
WASNT THAT FUNNY
hmm
i didnt really like that, i found it a waste of time. i gave the graphics a perfect score, however, as i loved the fat yellow thing at the beggining, so cute ;)
Decent.
Decent graphics, but the pot and sound were just not good at all.
some script notes
It seems like you've already gotten the feedback I'm going to say, but I'll say it anyway. Amazing production value, but even if this is just as "introduction", there still has to be some sort of through-line in the plot if you want your audience to stay interested. There was conflict, but we didn't know WHY, which is actually exactly what the introduction is supposed to establish.
cool
cool