8 mins?
im sorry, you are asking to much if you expect people to see the whole thing, i voted 3 but i definitely think you should split this in 3 parts at least. i saw about 1 minute and a half, i think it was well done but boring. but well done again. i hope it passes
thank you for reviewing, im sad to hear you didnt finish it, and i cant how i could have split it up, thank you for trying to watch it anyways
Great!
Awesome man, I really loved this one. Although you could probably work on the graphics, the story is awesome, it kept me very interested. Great first movie man, Congrats.
thanks alot glad you liked it
Not Bad
I think its actually quite good, if you practiced with your animation skills that would be totally awesome. Its too bad the animation really kind of sucked. Please o please do another version of this with better animation!
thanks for the review, i dont think i will be doing another version
The lesser fo two evils
i must say, it is a good feeling to find a flash movie that has some meaning. i do not find that you lack direction, nor meaning, it's more less expressing your thoughts simply enough for the commion viewer. you had so much hidden meaning you had to explain the move before it was played! i only find one thing that could use improving with your animation. you need to give the viewer something more to look at. you tell your story in words with some depiction, you just need to make the connection more oblivious. flash pictures by, for shadow, give them a mind fuck. make your flash a random as thought process. I gave you a 5 but, I couldn't sit through your movie again.
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thanks alot ill work on that
has meaning
good work jereemy. that flash had some good meaning in it.well done