0/10, newgrounds.
NG has resulted to trolling with frontpages? that's almost as insulting to us as it is to the artist for making him the subject of that. C'mon guys, seriously. Even the admins are like "why is this frontpaged?".
The piece itself is very rough, but shows heavy potential. You seem to know the ins and outs, now just apply it with time, knowledge, and effort :) I'm sure you'll develop into a fantastic artist.