Wow. That was really sweet.
Truly, this was a beautiful piece. Good music to go with it, too. 3EB is a great band. You really must have poured your heart and soul into this. It speaks to me. Thank you for making this, and I hope everything is ok in your life.
...and tell your friends to grow up.
Thank you very much man.I'm glad to see there are ppl out there who are looking for substance in flash,and I will tell them to grow up.lol
good
Graphics:
+ Quality of animation was pretty good. Most motion was pretty fluid, not too much jerkiness.
+ The actual drawing of the characters...that was decent. Not too great.
Sound:
+ Quality of sound was great. I could tell the quality of the song was 96k or thereabouts.
+ The song you picked was absolutely perfect for this
I'd also like to say that I was close to tears near the end...I don't know, I really miss my wife, and I get all emotional when I think about being away from her. Just 10 more days though...
very good
but unlike comazman said, the graphics are what makes the style of hte movie. if your satisfied with them or if thats the best of your ability, keep em, but keep drawing. im not Van Gogh (if thats how u spell it), but by drawing and doodling all the time, i improved. no real practice, i just improved.
ANYWAY, the movie was very good, adn i believe this should make at least 5th place in the dt5.
Thank you man.Its glad to see somone likes my stuff lol
Gothic Romance that needs more background
A nice change from the average "blood/drug/nudity" and "mario" combo of most cartoons on this site.
Graphics
The graphics in this cartoon are fairly well done and suit the scenery, i know it's hard but seeing how the arms are just blocks when they are transparent takes away from the otherwise fine drawings in the cartoon
Sound
The sound quality is fine, i can't say i'm a third eye blind fan but i don't think you are either ;). Regardless, oh and mildly amusing shameless plugs for nine inch nail, but why not add actual posters of the group up to support it?
Style
It's a cute story, but it's seemingly more of teenage angst of relationships then a love story. I mean, why are they apart at the begining? it's confusing, i mean they enjoyed each other so much. In one of your transparent flash back scenes it would have been more plot saked if you saw why they broke up in their transparencyness of them all.
Violence
Doesn't really need it. wooh~ N/A
Humor
N/A, unless you consider shameless plugs for NIN filler.
overall a good film, i'd be interested to see more of your work later to see how it develops.
Lol because I could'nt find any decent NIN posters and would'nt look horrable in small format..and theres a more personal side to the fact I used it more then once(its a long story lol)..I left the plot open to generalize the message..I beleave 50% of this peice is i wanted to relate it to ppl without going too much in ruff detail..everyone has there own reasons for breaking up with there gf/bf, or how they got dumped.. so i did'nt wnat an elabrate story to back it..no its not lazyness lol..it just in the presintation.THank you very much for your input man.
Great.
Wow, a great story of love.