its alrite.
Your graphics are good just need to work on the movment of your charactors and the way the interact with the enviroment. but the charactors are very well drawn :).
The story is quite boreing at the start of it i was like this is gonna be good and then it was just chit chit chit chat chat chat and laughing lol proper boreing.. i nearly feel asleep NO REALLY I NEARLY DID not because i been popping pills but because it was so boreing i closed my eyes and nearly went off on a voyage lol..
Work on the story :)