alright...
this has potential, but needs work. for instance the story, it just doesnt flow, and doesnt make sense. there also needs to be more animation, and less words. it just seems like a slideshow with a few words thrown in, i mean all you see is a few frames. if you work on your storyline, and take the time to make more of the story unfold within the animation, then this should be good.
Not bad
From an artistic standpoint that was a very well done submission and very much enjoyable. The blur effect was interesting and the plotline was nice. The animation was fairly good and the music was beautiful. The silent film feel of it was a bit thrown off by the long captions and the lack of real movement between captions. If you must, leave some of the plot to be figured out by the viewers, as opposed to losing viewers by boring them. In short, less details, more action. Not a bad movie all in all.
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Too much text...not enough animation, but the effects were done nicely. You should at least have a narrator reading the text.
Good
Well done! Godd text& audio effects through the beginning of the story, well done! I think after using that to introduce the movie you need to stop bringing up text bars and just carry on with a story for higher results. Well done though.
this was rather boring
there was not enough action,this is still good but it needs action.