First Work.. Really?
You must have had some practice before hand, and this is just your first submission to Newgrounds because it sounds like it was done by a person who has plenty of experience.
The transitions from one segment to the next were flawless, and the whole thing got stringed together nicely.
I think that the sound you incorporated at 1:12 was not good, though. The song fits perfectly, until that sound comes in and gave it a whole new feel to it. I suggest you take that out, and maybe stick to the same sounds you were using the whole song. Maybe just a little variation in rhythm.
If this is really your first work, it blew me away on those grounds. And as a final product, it was very good. It could just use some improvement.
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