that wasnt half bad
it was actually ok it kinda helps you i gess
that wasnt half bad
it was actually ok it kinda helps you i gess
Heh, pretty cool
I wondered how people always did that. You did a pretty good job on this. I like the picture that you drew, also. And the tutorial was pretty easy to follow. Not bad at all, keep up the good work.
thanks :)
not bad
hehe you asked for input so here goes
Graphics - Basic stick man drawings were alright if you ask me i mean you could tell what was what the animation was ok but nothing special and the spade lol well that was funnily cheap if you know what i mean
the way everything is miniturised i kinda like most other flash has stuff zoomed in a little more but i think its looked quite nice zoomed out myself hope to see it more flash as long as you can see whats going on
Sound - well some sound effects but nothing special needs work in this department although it didnt really need that much sound in it i suppose liked the squeltch at the end
Style
Structure - nothing wrong here preloader is in and its fairly easy to follow throughout also i was quite impressed by the overall speed of this flash ran along rather smoothly and was a decent length some tend to go on for to long not bad for 109k
Story - well cant really comment here but still i could tell what was happening but no idea as to why lol but its no big deal.
Humour - I liked the fact that random stuff happened lol like the van coming in wasnt expecting that more ideas like that and your next one will be really funny :)
Overall nice short fun
Hope this review helps possible critism is the stick men maybe tiny sprite would have suited it better and the sound needs sorting out and i didn notice some strange goingson with the clouds but thats no big deal
dude wtf were you reviewing?
this is helpfull
like all flash tutorials its good and im not good at working the flash thing my-self so i woulndt mind just like helping a flash artist u no like make them charracters to animate n stuff if u no any1 that needs help just tell me
Is that Dhalsim