Coool!!
This was great.. really helped me to my upcomeing movie!!
Reviews for "Flash Toon shading tut"
lol
u use swish to make flash cartoons?
swish is just for like... intros... and flash webpages..
get mx dude
Meh
It would be good for FLASH MX people, but Í Use Swish 2.0 :)
not bad
hehe you asked for input so here goes
Graphics - Basic stick man drawings were alright if you ask me i mean you could tell what was what the animation was ok but nothing special and the spade lol well that was funnily cheap if you know what i mean
the way everything is miniturised i kinda like most other flash has stuff zoomed in a little more but i think its looked quite nice zoomed out myself hope to see it more flash as long as you can see whats going on
Sound - well some sound effects but nothing special needs work in this department although it didnt really need that much sound in it i suppose liked the squeltch at the end
Style
Structure - nothing wrong here preloader is in and its fairly easy to follow throughout also i was quite impressed by the overall speed of this flash ran along rather smoothly and was a decent length some tend to go on for to long not bad for 109k
Story - well cant really comment here but still i could tell what was happening but no idea as to why lol but its no big deal.
Humour - I liked the fact that random stuff happened lol like the van coming in wasnt expecting that more ideas like that and your next one will be really funny :)
Overall nice short fun
Hope this review helps possible critism is the stick men maybe tiny sprite would have suited it better and the sound needs sorting out and i didn notice some strange goingson with the clouds but thats no big deal
s1nt3ch responds:
dude wtf were you reviewing?
that wasnt half bad
it was actually ok it kinda helps you i gess