Reviews for +Factory+

[FlamingFirebolt]

Its something different then your usual work

Oke, first of all.
Congrats on your 100th submission!

Anyways,
The track seems very 'loud'. With some harsh sounds like that lead synth.
And ofcourse the bass. The bass is kinda deep and i love that panning sound.
The drums are cool too. Something different. Altough i would like to have that snare/clap whatever it is a bit louder. To get that pumping feeling a bit more.
The quality is oke.. i mean i don't know much about this genre. But it sounds hard to Master it :P...
Anyways, for the Challenge i would rather go for an longer bassline (which i mean like the standard 4 bars or something in FL ). This is more of an riff. Which might get boring easily. But you fixed it with some different melodys. Might it be better if you changed the synth like here and then? For some more diversity?
Or must you use the same synth for Envy's challenge?
It's fast paced, aggresive and hard, Just like a factory..!?. Sometimes the drums kinda get drowned by the other sounds. but nonetheless a great track :)
Good job Writersblock

-firebolt-

Please check out my new song! :)

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for your review.
I did find this tricky to mix together, and I originally had a longer bassline planned, but thins one was more catchy, but I couldn't get as much melodic diversity. I could have changes the synth around a bit, and at one point I put the bass riff to the lead instrument, but other than that, it was the same all the way through.
Cheers for the comments and compliments.

[AltoPowder]

Holy God

This is very nice. Strong, pumps your blood. I was opening up Unreal Editor, and I was like, half asleep, now I'm awake... yeah! xD
10'd
5'd

Love your musics. ;p

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks, man!

[nal1200]

5'd

The name matches the piece exceedingly well.

AND THAT'S ALL YOU GET!
HAPPY 100th :]

WritersBlock responds:

Haha, thanks.

[HeavyTank]

*amazed*

Well , must say, this track blew my mind away!
lt was a long time ago that l listened to a track this powerful and "bad"...the melody was really good, and just where the initial beat started to be annoying the track changes its speed and style to keep you intrested!
This could easily played on a dancefloor with hordes of people moving their heads back and forth...awesome!
l hope you make more stiff in the future.....my sincere salutations from the

Review request club

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks for the compliments. I felt that this track was a step up in quality compared with some of my previous works of this style. I'd love to do more songs like this in the future, I had fun making it.
Cheers, man. Much appreciated.

[Dj-Fanta5t1c]

Whoa!

Blown away.
Industrial was for a while ambience with some drums and clanging annoying metal sounds. But we are all ending that streak, and Intense Industrial is coming through. If you ahve not heard my stuff, its really what industrial MEANS. When people think of industrial, they should tremble. Not o what is that pots n pans? This is some high class industrial. I see that you said it was in trance, i suggest you consider doing some minor adjustments, as in heavier, and a little more brutality to make it Strong in industrial and not just placed.

This is my longest review in a while =P But this 5 mins have not been wasted. I felt an intensity in the beginging that really made me fall in love with this.

ok some bad stuff, That lead synth seems recognizable as the rave synth in fl. and it kinda took away. a bit more personalized would make it sweet! and just a heavier kick. to really give it a nicer industrial feel.

This song is great man. and it deserves its place in the top of the audio portal. this song is GREAT not just good. the whole song is worth listening to. and id say about 80% of the authors cant say the same for their songs.

So great job once again. youve really shown me industrial has a chance ^.^

hit me up with a review sometime man, it would be well appreciated!

WritersBlock responds:

Hey, thanks for the compliments and criticisms! I really appreciate them.
Also, thanks for the favs.
I'll make sure to have a listen in on your music.
Thanks.