S'good. Needs more production.
This caught me ear in PP2 simply because the beginning sounded like something from Telefon Tel Aviv.
It falls apart a little bit after the beginning, but it's still a very well made song. Is there any chance you could work on producing this track a bit more? This could very easily be record material. 10'd and 5'd for good music, though.
hehe cool
This is really neat. It's got a very unique sound, the synths you use really create the song. I especially like the ambiance, sounds great. The only problem I have with it really is that it doesn't seem to flow very well, it almost seems choppy in the way it transitions inbetween the 4 measure phrases. You could maybe solve this by having the ambiance fade out after each note instead of just ending, but maybe its just my tastes. I also really like the way the song comes down at the end. Well done all around, 5/5
yeah i see what you mean about the transitions. i usually do trance so the arrangement is pretty awkward here. thanks for the review!
not bad
this is a good piece, nice pace and it flows nicely, as well as an amazing bit of synth work, quite impressive.
Ambient...
Hm. First I noticed that the opening piano wasn't a very good sample. Its sorta muddy in the mids, which can get bad later, especially with the amount of reverb on it. I'd advise using an E-Piano instead, or a Rhodes type of thing.
Next, I noticed that the hats are a bit grating for a song that I'd want to fall asleep to. Try some reverb, and EQ out some of the fuzz.
I like that lower square, but the upper sawtooth kinda gives me a headache. It goes too high, and the progression wasn't catchy enough to merit doing that.
However, I like some of the ideas here, and it does mesh well in the end. Its just too short, and kinda repetitive. I guess we both have the same problems when it comes to producing...
Anyways, it was actually a pretty cool blend by the end. I enjoyed it. 8/10, 5/5
yeah i've been using the same piano for like
half a year? probably more
i need to look into some soundfonts or something =P
thanks for reviewing!