Well notbad
This was abit on the disturbing side but you did present some nice art, and your character work was decent, just was not fond of the them, and or the idea, i did really like the "ART" maybe change up the idea somewhat to something for more of the general public, anyways good luck on your next entries
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as explained the idea was abit odd and disturbing and somewhat on the characters so there could be a few changes there, thats more appealing to the general public, just an idea though, an interesting yet odd idea, i would try something abit differant next time though
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