O_O
this sounds like something a producer under tunnel records would pump out, so good job on that, I like their style of trance/hard trance.
alright, now to help you with this and your knowledge. This song is clipping pretty bad (your peaking on your db's too high). Turn that volume down on the master board, it would do wonders.
(if I knew the program or way you produce your tracks, I could help you more, mucho)