Improvement
I saw a few of your other entries, so i'm judging this one as kind of a summary of ur flash skills. you need to incorporate some speech in with the subtitles, and move things along quicker. overall, not bad.
Reviews for "Elements Part One Remade"
ShibbyHoboJoe responds:
thanks for the review
well...
The old one was crappy,so im glad you did make this,this was pretty good,too bad the elements episodes are over though.
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Cool
Your ability to draw is truly a gift it adds so much to your work on this flash
Needs sound for the voices
It would be much better if you had voices instead of speech balloons
What
you were kinda on a roll there then you lost me ...but that could be because i'm add hey u guys like confetty squares?