hey
pretty good looks to be promising , but you have to change at the end where it says "to be begun" it's not proper english, something more like "to begin" would be better.
Reviews for "Renegade Shadow - Prelude"
MonkeyClock responds:
Who said it had to be proper english? It's poetic sir =)
nice...
not bad, but too short, and no so much action...
And then i saw red...
Oh boy!!
MonkeyClock responds:
Oh girl!!
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Nice loading screen, a bit more origional that the NG one. I'll be honest - I liked that. It was a good choice of sound, voices were good and graphics were good. Subtitles a good idea too.
MonkeyClock responds:
Hooray someone commented on my loader ^_^
That was damn NICE!
Wow, keep up the good work that was really great.