Here my comment
What you have done wrong >)
1) It is to short
2) There is no plot (or is there? I don't remember one)
3) no preloader, too
4) No sounds (music, but no sounds)
5) You used Sticks. Sticks usually show a lack of skill.
Reviews for "Death Of Skating"
GET A PRELOADER!
I wasted 5 minutes sittin here,dude.I didn't actually get to see your Flash!Maybe i would've given you a 5 if i liked it...
what?
its way too big not to have a pre-loader.
its boaring and has no action.
it just generally crap
Buttons
your buttons didn't work and I had to rick click and press forward to get through the button scenes and then do play to watch the rest of the movie. Other then that it's pretty good. The animations could be a bit better though.
buttons
I liked it but the buttons didn't work so i had to use the play thing but yeah i liked it mostly becasue i like skateborading...it was good...fix the buttons