Reviews for Unfinished Story (original)

[Little-Rena]

Pretty Good

This is certainly a pretty good tune, although I'm not too keen on some parts of this myself, much of it does sound very good which is nice to hear. You have a decent opening and the thing ends well too, which are both good things to have, but I would have had some build up at the start, it might have worked better than going right into the song as you did with this.

I hear no real problems with this though overall, I mean it all does come together well so I can't really say much there, just some more build up on the intro part I think would be good to have but other than that, I can't hear much that needs improving.

5/5

<3

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(

thank you very much for the suggestiong, i guess ill make another version with a more built opening or a buildup since its quite forward the one we have here :P, and ill notify you when its uploaded :D thanks :D

[Cue94]

its not as bad as you may think

i like it, im surprized no ones wrote reviews about this too, but everything sounds good to me in this song, its probably something i'd use during a time phase for some epic adventure or something, who knows! probably not even me. oh well. but anyways, i'll definatly check out some of your other songs, goodluck with future submissions

genee responds:

thank you Cue94, yeah youre right, it feels like and epict adventure song:P ,ill try to keep posting more songs and if u ever make a flash and want the song go ahead ( :) , and i really apreciate your comment, thanks again :)

[HeavyTank]

Actually...

....this is very good!
It combines various types of rhythms and the result may be crazy, but it is cool!
Well since you asked for some suggestions in the author's comments l'll be happy to oblige:
1.Make the track a little less repetitive on some points
2.Add some heavy beats
3.Make the transition from one melody to another smoother
Apart from that, the track is perfect!

genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

hello again, i think its crazy and cool and experimental, something ive been leaving forgoten for a reason i dont even know lol, thats why i experimented again :D, ill work on the repetiveness since its something ive heard quite alot lately :P, as from the melodies transition im not quite sure with melodies :( and ill consider the heavy beats ;P thanks :D

[Fro]

Not bad.

It was something a little different, but I really did enjoy listening to it. In my opinion you had a lot of variation with different beats and everything. The title suggest that you are going to make a better or newer one of this same one if I'm correct. Make sure to post that new one in the review request club so I can come back and review it.

C52

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

I guess it is something diferent, i was experimenting there, i decided to leave some sounds with no filters and just the pure dry sound hehe so i guess it was a big crazy mess lol, well the title, was something i came out out of nowere i guess because im considering remastering it with some more tweaks because it was experimental :P and some kind of more techno version of it hehe, ill post it when its ready to be heard lol :D thanks :D

[AnalPenguinFarming]

Not as bad as you think...

It definitely wasn't as sloppy as you made it out to be in your Author's comments. I actually found it to be quite impressive. I liked the way it was a bunch of sounds mixed up because that means one thing for the song - it isn't repetitive. Once you try to aim for a certain beat that builds up throughout a song, you always have to worry about boring the person listening. This song you didn't have that to worry about at all. In fact this at no point got too repetitive. However there was a buildup at one point, but in the end it turned out great! Even the ending, though it sounded different from the rest of the song, fit in great! Nice work!

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genee responds:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

you are completely right, i guess i killed it on my comment T_T, well i was kidna hyper and since it was something experimental .... im glad u actually liked it hehe the ending still im not quite convinced with it, i did another version with an alternate ending to this one, i guess ill post it to see what you think about it . thanks for reviewing it :D

im glad its not repetitive hehe:D